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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity

0 posted 2010-01-20 06:04 PM






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Walk with me


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Walk with me
barefoot
upon the tall grass
where myriads
of dewdrops
mirror the splendor
of Universe.

Walk with me
hand in hand
in the sunshine
of this new morning.
Drench your skin
with purity
on this carpet of renewal.

Walk with me
this path of healing
made of rainbow bubbles.
Release your fear
exhale all the tension
remember with every step
that you are Love.

Walk with me,
capture the harmony
dancing around you
with gracious
power of seduction.
Move into the reverberation
of the perfect cosmic
creativity.

Walk with me,
know the infinite beauty
of the dialogue
between Mother Earth
and your soul.
Then embrace me,
let your heart and body
touch mine.

Walk with me
in the light of dawn
be my morning star,
my sunrise
and my sunset.
Let your life
melt with mine
and walk with me
the entrancing
path of eternity.


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© Copyright 2010 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2010-01-20 06:34 PM


Dear Cosmic Princess of Love, I adore this poem beyond the stars. There is sheer magic in your words. You are in a league all your own, dear POETESS.

I am going back in immerse myself in the splendor of the images and the feelings they evoke.





AT

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2010-01-20 06:39 PM


Margherita - I'm on the way to walk with you after reading this beautiful poem...

BC

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2010-01-20 06:42 PM


Yo dear Margherita,

This is lovely for those into grass.  I only do (get it "dew"/"do") city sidewalks.

Love Bobby

MGROVES
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Posts 3802
california
4 posted 2010-01-20 07:53 PM


I have seem to come and visit at a perfect
time.   I needed to hear this.  beautiful.  

miss you all, marcia

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
5 posted 2010-01-20 09:33 PM


I love "barefooting" through the grass. I will definately join you.  latearrival
unboundpoetess
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since 2008-05-24
Posts 477

6 posted 2010-01-20 10:03 PM


Already got my shoes off. And my hat, cuz you are elegant, as always : )

L,
H

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2010-01-21 07:59 AM


up to the top~

WOW, I had shock factor on this on, my favorite of yours, loved the picture and the beautiful words, how they flowed down the page like a river of happiness!

Love and hugs!

~ARH

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060
White Birch Forest
8 posted 2010-01-21 12:31 PM


Beautiful and I will be there soon to walk with you! I don't walk very well but we could walk for a little bit.

ooxx  Marti

________________________
I do the MS Walk everyday!

suthern
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Posts 20723
Louisiana
9 posted 2010-01-22 06:55 PM


Incredibly beautiful!!! *S*
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
10 posted 2010-01-23 12:08 PM


Margherita this is Beautiful, I just got out of my bubble to admire your cosmic and tender poem...This is impressive and pure...Thanks for sharing.

yann

Mysteria
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British Columbia, Canada
11 posted 2010-01-23 12:45 PM


At first I thought you were dedicating this to our Kacy, and you know, I would still like to think that.  It was pure, true, and beautifully done.  Brava!
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
12 posted 2010-01-23 01:04 PM


fine writing !

"Walk with me,
  know the infinite beauty
  of the dialogue
  between Mother Earth
  and your soul."

much applause for this 'penning' !

vandana
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USA
13 posted 2010-01-24 12:14 PM


liked it
Margherita
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Eternity
14 posted 2010-01-24 12:27 PM


Dear Linda Angelo Terrestre, your reply bursts with light and grace, you are always so generous to make me blush, thank you dear one.

Dear Bill, that's perfect, wouldn't it be just great? Thank you for enjoying the thought of this walk.

Dear Bobby, I am also mostly walking in the city, but I do enjoy every single blade of grass I meet on my way. Thank you so much.

Dear Marcia, what a great surprise to find you here on my thread. You are very much missed too. Good to hear that you are doing fine. Thank you for your loving reply. I look forward to commenting on one of your own poems soon!

It will be a pleasure to walk with you and to giggle in the grass, dear Martyjo. Thank you so much.

Dear Heather, barefoot is such a good feeling and on dew it's even better. My hat is off in admiration for your works too always! Thank you for coming by with such a loving comment.

Dear ARH, shock factor? You brought a smile with this spontaneous reply, that I appreciate very much. Thank you so much for telling me you like it.

Dear Marti, how nice that you have come in here. Thank you, I would enjoy a walk with you at a slow pace. We would enjoy it all the more.

Dear Ruth, thank you for the spark of joy you brought with your generous reply.

Cher Yann, I appreciate your coming out of your bubble to read and enjoy my poem. Your comment is so very kind, thank you.

Dear mysterious Sharon, thank you so much. You know, though I have written this poem before hearing of the transition of beloved Kacy, I also had this thought that it would actually fit. This brings tears to my eyes. Oh, how I would have enjoyed a walk through nature with Kacy!! I think she will stay with us for a long long time, because she has touched our hearts with her beautiful mind and soul.

Thank you, dear Bruce, for honoring me with your loving comment.

Thank you too, dear Vandana, for enjoying the read!

Thank you all, my Pip friends.
Enjoy a beautiful Sunday.
Love,
Margherita  

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
15 posted 2010-01-26 08:00 AM


What a lovely walk that was, Margherita. I always think you have outdone yourself until I read your next one.
My computer has been down for a while so I have been on the site much lately, Glad to be back.
                            Ida

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11
Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA
16 posted 2010-01-26 03:07 PM


I enjoyed the walk Margherita. Beautiful. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
17 posted 2010-01-26 05:34 PM


Thank you so much, dear Ida, for your loving comment. I am very happy that your computer problems are solved, your presence here is deeply appreciated and you are missed when you are gone.

Dear Stephen, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting so kindly!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
18 posted 2010-01-26 06:26 PM


Walk with me
barefoot
upon the tall grass..................."

That's always a nice feeling.
Beautiful as always, Margherita.


ARCTIC WIND

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
19 posted 2010-01-27 12:11 PM




"Walk with me
in the light of dawn"

I will walk with you Margherita
this falls softly on the heart


shortsleeves
Member
since 2008-10-19
Posts 125
Franklin Tennessee
20 posted 2010-01-28 02:37 PM


Walk with me through the endless expressions of love, which fill the arms of consciousness with your vibrations.
Beautiful thoughts Margherita.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
21 posted 2010-01-28 02:45 PM


ah dear lady M, you leave me breathless. Makes me reminisce those barefoot days in the garden, longing for Spring again so I can plant goodies to eat!

But for now, I am here in my fuzzy slippers, walking with you in my heart.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
22 posted 2010-01-29 06:11 PM


Delicious...James
wicked
Junior Member
since 2010-01-29
Posts 22
Florida, USA
23 posted 2010-01-29 09:11 PM


INCREDIBLE.

I am that I am,
And that makes it me.
I float like a rock
But I sting like a bee.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
24 posted 2010-02-04 01:09 PM


Thank you, dear Michael, it's a joy to find your loving reply on this thread!

Dear Kate, thank you so much! "This falls softly on the heart" ... love your comment!

Dear Hal, thank you for reading and commenting so kindly. It gives me joy to see you here.

That sounds great, dear Dixie, yes walk with me in the heart. Spring will soon fascinate you again! Thank you so much!

Dear James, thank you for your kind appreciation.

Dear wicked, I enjoyed your comment and thank you very much.

Love,
Margherita


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