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ken206573
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since 2008-10-14
Posts 487


0 posted 2010-01-19 06:10 PM



I'm wandering through
an unknown location,
even though I have
been here all my life.
I know their faces,
but never the names,
listening at best,
yet never hearing
a word.
It's in clear view,
yet I am
blinded at times.
I know the fictions,
but not
the facts,
hanging from the
edge of my mind.I'm
between a concrete
jungle and
a silent storm
I rather be bewildered
within a dazed,
instead I am
lost.


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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2010-01-19 09:03 PM


Yo Ken,

"Within a dazed" what?

Bobby

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2010-01-21 08:04 AM


feeling you in this~

~ARh

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