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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2010-01-18 04:20 PM



Like inmates, we became intimate,
Like we had no choice in the matter,
Intimate, like we were infinite,
Like we became matted,
Became indifferent to differences,
(They became intangible,)
Until we became interchangeable,
Impalpable, and indistinguishable,
Same features, same fingerprints,
Same lungs – inflammable,
Same tongues - inextinguishable!

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-01-20 03:44 PM


Very captivating, dear Andrey!

Love,
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan
2 posted 2010-04-15 06:37 AM


The words drew me in and I read like a man possessed.
Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
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3 posted 2010-04-23 02:40 PM


I like it.  The language sings.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

OldBuddyOldPal
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4 posted 2010-04-23 04:51 PM


Hot hot hot!!!
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