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MindBodySoul
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since 2007-01-10
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NJ

0 posted 2010-01-17 01:36 PM



There is nothing more beautiful.......
Than the love that hides deeply in your eyes
That which hides from the common eye
Yet it surfaces, when you look into my eyes
It can't hide from me, for I can see it even when it tries to hide
True love has been a gift to both

There is nothing more meaningful.....
Than the tenderness in which you take me in your arms to kiss me
As if holding a fragile porcelain doll
I feel your hunger in your touch
As our bodies skillfully spoon in comfort
Such a perfect fit

In your eyes i see the need for me to be close to you
In your touch I feel the need of your comfort zone
Your body desperately needs to devour me
Yet you take your time, there is no rush

We have all the time in the world
so it seems...
Time standing still....when you look into my eyes
Nothing else matters but that moment in time....
there is nothing more.....

Jen--->MindBodySoul

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Dadygoose
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since 2010-01-01
Posts 162
A Communist country
1 posted 2010-01-17 04:45 PM


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Myyyyyyyyyyy!
It even looks like the two poems are related.
One before the other or after the other ...
My heart, my lips, my arms are open
J

Hey, nobody's human!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
2 posted 2010-01-17 05:38 PM


fine expression of Romanticism ...

applause for this 'penning' !!

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