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Elric
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since 2010-08-24
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southbend, WA

0 posted 2010-08-27 04:34 AM


What is this fickle thing called time?
Time, a word that binds us to life.
If time doesn't exist than what are we?
Time, a word man made to bring structure to life.
In space time can be warped.
In space time doesn't exist.
If time doesn't exist than why would we?
Time, a word that all civilization is built apon.
What would happen if time disappeared?
Would we disappear?
What is this fickle thing called time?


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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-08-27 06:25 AM


I've often wondered myslef about time and our existance. Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610

2 posted 2010-08-27 07:57 AM


You ask some thought provoking questions here, Elric. Truly makes one think.

Enjoyed the write.


~Sunkissed

easy1
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since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
3 posted 2010-08-27 10:49 AM


Time is a sledge pulled
by hard workers who need food
and encouragement.
It is a stepping drop, and
even biological.

Cannot resist when it comes to "time" and one who so clearly does understand it as you the author do here.

Elric
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since 2010-08-24
Posts 43
southbend, WA
4 posted 2010-08-27 04:23 PM


thank you everyone for the comments.
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