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Abe
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0 posted 2010-01-13 12:11 PM



Just Wonderin'

Just wonderin', what I said
Or maybe, what I shouldn't have
Just wonderin', what I did
Or maybe, what, I could have.

Just wonderin', what you want
And if I couldhave given
Just wonderin', why I felt
Once more, I'd started livin'.

Just wonderin' what it's like
To hold youin my arms
Just wonderin', but I know
I've not seen all your charms.

Just wonderin', if you believe
But, can't blame you if you don't
Just wonderin', if some feelings end
When I know, that mine won't.

Just wonderin', (but, not reallly!)
What I saw there, in you
Just wonderin', why there aren't more
Who do things, like you do.

Just wonderin', if anyway
We can be, at least, good friends
Just wonderin', if I'll find, just one
Before, my journey, ends?


Del "Abe" Jones
Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984

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1 posted 2010-01-13 05:06 PM


Abe,

Thank you for sharing your wonderin' poem with us.  It's a poignant piece of writing and touched me.

A

latearrival
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2 posted 2010-01-13 09:40 PM


Very soft,  I enjoy reading all you write, latearrival
Klassy Lassy
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3 posted 2010-01-15 03:11 PM


Mental meanderings of the heart. Yes.  It is a little sad in the wondering.   ~Karen
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2010-01-15 11:50 PM


Nice...James
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