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Waterfall Fantasies |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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Waterfall Fantasies As the waterfall descends the misty cliffs, she stands with open mouth, feeling the droplets as they splash upon her face, eyes closed, tongue out trying to get as many as she can, laughing and spinning as they continue to slide down her throat, not realizing she is completely soaked from the force of the flow, as it becomes fully consuming and she looses all sense of reality, falling to her knees, with a smile on her face and her desires, and needs quenched. The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Another person who likes catches raindrops. This is my kind of poem! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The title mentions two of my favorite things... how could I not love this? *S* Beautiful, sensual write... each line led me farther into the land of smiles. *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I saw it all and felt like a voyeur! Beautiful. A |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Mysteria, Thank you so much for catching my waterfall as it dropped into your fanatsies. Love always, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Ruth, so glad you enjoyed my waterfall fantasy, I can see you there, right in the middle of it smiling, Thank you so much Tracey. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Alison, I will share my waterfall with you any time. Just step on in and enjoy. Thanks for your wonderful comments, love always, Tracey |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ooo, la, la! Loved the sensuality of this! I thoroughly enjoyed this reading 'experience'! What a glorious way to quench one's thirst!    Linda www.lindadowd.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's always been a fantasy of mine, maybe one day... |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Linda, Thanks for enjoying this outdoors shower. I was going for a visualy enticing experience. Love always, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
passing shadows, Don't ever let go of your fantasies. they do come true if you want them to. Be seeing you in the water. Love always, Tracey |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful fantasy, you can enter a state of trance under a waterfall ... Love, Margherita  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WTBAKELAR - lovely vision this is... BC |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Margherita, I am so glad you found my Waterfall fantasy en-trancing, Nice to see you. Love always, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Bill, Thanks for stopping in under my waterfall for a brief repose. Here is the picture that goes with this poem. Forgot how to post the pictures. http://fineartamerica.com/watermark.html?id=588365 Good to see you. Tracey |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thanks, James, good to see you. Tracey |
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