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Sheen New Member
since 2010-01-10
Posts 7Hawaii,US |
I know that I may not have good grammar it's because English is my second language. I just love spilling my thoughts out in raps or poetry and I thank the people who made this site possible. For me, it's like sharing one big diary. Let all words be explained by our actions, take pride in good doings with no fractions. Keep praise to the one above, as he watches us with care and love. Blessings are signs of hope, so keep striving and don't say nope. Everybody has their own belief, although death is unstoppable, please no grief. Everyone may have a different kinda duty, but one thing we have in common is our own natural beauty. No nerds, no geeks, no calling names, after all we are all the same. Unique in our own natural fashion, and genuine in our hearts with compassion. So change your ways from the bad to the good, no need to be ashamed cause- all is understood. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I love your positive thoughts and the humility of your words, Thanks for the graceful share. yann |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The stucture that you may employ maybe different but the words have a rhythm and flow that makes this piece worthy. |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Sometimes it not how share but our hearts behind why share...heartfelt and sincere..good job. ww |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Sheen, I'd advize looking at, and commenting on other people posts so you get some idea about how it's done. Bobby |
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