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secondhanddreampoet
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                deliverance

As a brisk winter wind  
teases the dancing-shadow
   moonbeams
through deep, soft corridors
of this white-velvet forest evening,
all must be surrendered to such a
time and place of gentle peace and
   fleeting sorrows,
but the finest memories and dreams…
   of love.
                
              --- b. e. adams (1/9/2010)

© Copyright 2010 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-09-2010 09:45 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Responding to your poetry first is like walking through untouched snow. Your words still a resstless part of me.  We all carry our memories of love, but you express it better than most of us.

I am liking this one a lot, Bruce.

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A pleasure to read...James
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very nicely done indeed...i love how you managed to say so much in so few words!

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

 
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