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The bluetit and the snow
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The bluetit and the snow |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Where will you sleep small bluetit? Not in the reflections of the winter, neither on the branch of snow, not in the nothingness of the sky, nor under the ice-cold bridge, Where will you sleep small bluetit? Surely in your blue and yellow feathers. What will you eat small bluetit? Not the reflections of the winter neither the branch of snow, not the nothingness of the sky nor the ice-cold city, What will you eat small bluetit? Surely not your blue and yellow feathers. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
This poem really makes good use of repetition for emphasis on winter. I like it very much and the flash of color in the cold. I am reminded of the winter a lone chickadee roosted on a beam of my front porch. There was a sadness to it and I grew attached. Then one day it flew, and my thoughts were much the same. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann This poem really touched me because it spoke to a world that I seek. I love watching birds and wondering where they go and where they sleep. Nature is a mystery and I long to always know more. Thank you for brining beauty and wonder to my evening. Alison |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Yann, Very very good . . . With your permission would like to add this to my Word file of poems by others. Again, very very good John . |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Yann, Very very good With your permission would like to add this to my Word file of poems by others. Again, very very good. John |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
This is super awesome. I find myself refreshed after reading it, even at this ungodly hour. Fall in love early, fall in love often. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks a lot Lassy for the lovely story contained in your comment, The feelings about nature can be overwhelming...I liked your appreciation of the poem too. have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks dear Alison for the warm comment, yes we have to learn everyday about nature, abour ourselves, thanks for the sentiments of your comment and the appreciation you did. have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Huan for the homage, I appreciate a lot, I am honored that you add this poem to your collection, please do, thanks for the read and comment, have a nice day yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks a klot Viking for the warm and kind comment, I am happy that you loved the poem....The poem in french has been illustrated with a photo that is awesome, if I was defty with technical I woukld have send it to you... have a nice day yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
yann - for some reason these words just touched me, perhaps the thougth of winter's cold, I'm not sure, but they did touch... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Bill, the story of the bletit is a general story which cabn be attached to some people I guess, thanks for your touching comment. yann |
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