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WindWalker12
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0 posted 2010-01-08 08:37 PM


Clayoquot

O
the tall!
stately majestically
waving cone-filled
branches dark-green
old growth Douglas fir:
sways its rugged head
in the rain-soaked breeze
the salty ocean breeze
the breath of a thousand years
ages when the land spoke of life, simple,
when the salmon ran heedless, free
up fast flowing rivers of crystal rains
translucent greens reflected
a million times upon wrinkled mirrors
that sang past sands
where beaver tails left trails
where tiny twin-hoofed prints laughed
into the new day:
before the campfires
and children's laughter
stood the tree
tall and proud
sure time-less
home for bird
and beast
above its head:
the home of
the gods
the chainsaw
came one day
leaving only
a bleeding stump
a homeless eagle
five dead squirrels
and the ageless tree crashed!
to its side across the mountain side, dying:
the river, the reflections, the breath of God,
footprints in the sand; the fish;
the old ways which intermingled in the forest:
all died that day

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1 posted 2010-01-09 03:10 PM


I loved this and can sure feel the pain of our earth these days.  I live right in the thick of trees.  Sometimes with all the cleared areas here, they get angry, and in the wind let us know it, but otherwise they behave.  It is just so sad to see the amount of clearing for housing going on.  I don't even know what is the answer.  We all are going to regret this and sooner than we think!

                     
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secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2010-01-09 06:36 PM


this write speaks with the 'voice' of Gaia ...

I as especially fond of:

old growth Douglas fir:
sways its rugged head
in the rain-soaked breeze
the salty ocean breeze
the breath of a thousand years
ages when the land spoke of life, simple,
when the salmon ran heedless, free
up fast flowing rivers of crystal rains
translucent greens reflected
a million times upon wrinkled mirrors
that sang past sands
where beaver tails left trails
where tiny twin-hoofed prints laughed
into the new day"

MUCH (sustained) applause for this fine stewardship of Nature 'penning' !

secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2010-02-15 12:42 PM


continuing applause for this fine 'penning' !!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2010-02-15 07:45 PM




it does indeed speak with the voice of Gaia

there are simply some poets on these pages who can always be counted on to cause a shiver and a catch in the breath
this is fine work WindWalker

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2010-02-16 02:31 PM


This poem touches me and makes me very sad as I remember the forest where I played  as a child. Progress took my part of the forest.
                               Ida
                                

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
6 posted 2010-02-19 03:04 PM


This ripped out what is left of my tattered heart, after the sorrows of losing first my Daisy-dog, then our Kacy.  Fictional or not, I hope the Douglas Fir is now alive and well again, shading Kacy and Daisy and Flicka, my horse, in the Hereafter.  

Owl

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