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Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15
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0 posted 2010-01-08 04:49 PM





Look into the whitest of my eyes
Sadness tells me to respect this life
Impression of beauty cunning
The effect a gaze through windows haze stunning
Play the painter's image not on a sullen face running
A painful memory one I cannot erase and flung
What I see - I know now hanging still
My body wanting the death defying thrill
Wrinkling to energy ghastly a thrill in my heart fills
Time goes on and on to an end, then back to the start
The form respectively a drawing in my hands – an art
Smooth is the breeze that blows through my deserted parts


See also: poetryandwatertogo.blogspot.com

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-08-21 11:45 AM


Laverne,

there is a unique emptiness implied
by this poem. I appreciated being able
to read it. Thank you.


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