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Snow Memories. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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Snow feathers descend, wind draughted, drifting drowsily like half remembered memories into my mind.Circling my heart,kept liquid by searing warmth,Spark hot, moving through enveloping opaque white brume, into tommorows fragrant wild spring air. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
"Snow feathers descend...drifting drowsily like half remembered memories into my mind". You captured the snowflakes perfectly to my mind, and "Circling my heart,kept liquid by searing warmth",is very romantic & hopeful too maybe "into tommorows fragrant wild spring air". A lovely poem. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
I felt as if I were standing at a window watching the lace like a white curtain falling, where forms are still softly tangible like a dream. It's a peaceful feeling, where I drift, too. I always love your poems! Karen |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
imagery most fine ! I am particularly fond of the beginning of this 'write' : “Snow feathers descend, wind draughted, drifting drowsily like half remembered memories..." and, I am indeed most anxious to experience that: "fragrant wild spring air" ! sustained applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some poetry is perfection to my senses. This is one of those poem. It kind of is a keeper in memory. I really like this, Phil. Thank you. Alison |
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