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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I have realized, I am, a trader, so to speak. (I guess) Even as I type these words I shrug as if I am guileless. I've been lying to myself My shadow smacks herself, and notes: "That just might be a real nice move." My shadow smacks herself, and notes, nodding at the drama's twice implications obvious licking at the audience hoping for some good stage drool... tossing sticks and handkerchiefs tottering toward the cliffs I have realized I am a trader, so to speak. (I guess) Even as I type these words I shrug as if I am guileless. I've been lying to myself  My shadow smacks herself, and notes: "That might not be a real smooth move." My shadow smacks herself, and dotes upon the clouds there in the sky implications obvious licking lust and compromise hoping for some good stage drool... Lacy-fringe-stitched handkerchiefs tottering the cliffs am I the fool, with one foot up in swing (to back) the other grips tenacity clinging in the soft doe skin: My toes are cleft remembering everything I've ever been and nothing after all. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (01-08-2010 06:56 AM).] |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Tell your shadow to stop slapping herself. This is brilliant and the depths of your mind are profound. I truly loved the ending lines. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
My shadow smacks herself, and notes: "That might not be a real smooth move." yep, mine too good write here and love the picture of you! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks J--and I'm just playing around with format again. It keeps me off the streets.  Thank you, too, Dixie. Congrats on the books, and I hope things are working out for the best for you. Love and gratitude to all.  And as for me and my shadow boxing? Well, y'should see the other guy...   |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...ah, the rise and fall of after all... wisdom and hindsight? Karen, I've no doubt that under your skin, there is always a marvelous Being to fend off the faints of a shadow boxer. Loved this one, too! ~K |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I wish I was there to give you a "noogie" that would fix ya up Hey! This sorta read like a song lady. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You've got a good ear, Mysterian! I'm considering picking that guitar up again...it'll give my son something more to laugh about. But I figure I've always written lyrics anyhow, so what the heck? My son can laugh at me all he wants--if I want to make him cry I'll take back my Takemine...and SING. Thanks for reading. And fertilizing my strawberries. Much love and appreciation to the Klassy Lassy as well. |
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