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Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
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0 posted 2010-08-27 02:28 AM



At least I can figure it out by now,
and I'm not the one you adore.
Either move beyond this grand moment,
or I might as well walk out the door.
What's funny? A good question I
think. You were the best part in
my life's chain link.Never mind now dear
lady, may you not be restrained,nor your
hands held forced at your side. Your freedom
to act as you wish,was a blessing on
which I've relied. I know that there's
nothing to do now, that you just won't
be held at bay. Yet knowing the
circumstances, heartfelt gratitude
I do relay. This the circle of life,
in time some good, with great loss.
I try to give as well as I can,
so if not for me wisdom,
then solace.


Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

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katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
1 posted 2010-08-27 04:17 AM


Very beautiflly written and heartfelt.
Kat >^..^<

Sunkissed
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 610

2 posted 2010-08-27 08:04 AM


It's hard to let someone that you love go. Yet sometimes, we have no choice.

Enjoyed reading!


~Sunkissed

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2010-08-29 06:09 AM


I would say this is very wise and very nice.

Love,
Margherita

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