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Been there, Done that...(Or Have I?)
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Been there, Done that...(Or Have I?) |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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I've been to so many places, I've seen so many faces. Swam in the bluest of oceans, Felt the cool of the purest frost bitten potions. I've been to the tops of the tallest mountains, I've wished in the most lavish of fountains. Seen the sunset across fields of grain, Observed arial scenery from the window of a plane. I've gazed at stars on the clearest of nights, I've walked in the biggest cities lights. Been around the world a time or two, Walked through the oldest forests it's true. But everytime I look into your eyes, Nothing can compare not even the bluest skies. And everytime I see your smiling face, I feel my heart begin to race. Sitting next to you I feel my breath escape me, Baby I'm yours cant you see? I've been so many places, I've seen so many faces. None have captivated me as much as yours. |
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DonRodrigue New Member
since 2010-01-07
Posts 5 |
Awesome... I was captured from the very start and then towards the end when the direction was changed, I was recaptured all over again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hot Flakes, I was smiling from the beginning of your delightful poem right to the precious end of it! I'm happy for you! ~ and for her!!!    EA www.lindadowd.com |
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