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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2010-01-06 09:27 PM


Bones is all wrong.  
Everything about Bones is wrong.  
Everything Bones does is wrong.  
Bones lives in
the wrong part of town,
on the wrong street,
and in a wrong house.  

Bones doesn’t worry about it.

His good looks
make the right things
happen for Bones.  

Bones definitely has
the wrong attitude.

Bobby

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2010-01-06 11:15 PM


Enjoyed...James
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2 posted 2010-01-06 11:38 PM


You will never make me believe that everything about Bonse is all wrong.  Not in this lifetime anyway.  Maybe he didn't have it all, but I have seen a lot of right in Bones.  See your poetry shows me so much more than words, Bobby.

Love,
A

2islander2
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3 posted 2010-01-07 03:13 AM


hello Bobby, do what you do, even wrong is right (I guess) However thanks for the relativity of the confession, it makes me think about...

have a nice day

yann

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4 posted 2010-01-07 10:28 AM


I don't believe it.
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5 posted 2010-01-07 10:38 AM


His ATTITUDE ~ be it good, bad, or indifferent is what makes Bones ~ Bones! He's his own man and he walks to the beat of his own drum!


Linda

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2010-01-07 01:16 PM


Thanks James,

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2010-01-07 01:18 PM


Thanks dear Alison,

I'm very pleased that you see some good in Bones.  That will make him happy.

Love Bobby/Bones

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2010-01-07 01:19 PM


Thanks Yann,

I'm always pleased when my poems make you think.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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9 posted 2010-01-07 01:20 PM


Thanks dear Passing Shadows,

Bones thanks you for your supportive words.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2010-01-07 01:21 PM


Thanks dear Linda,

I think you're right about Bones.  He's very much his own man.

Love Bobby

WindWalker12
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11 posted 2010-01-08 08:33 PM


I really like this one, and I think there is a lot of good in Bones
Robert E. Jordan
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12 posted 2010-01-09 12:26 PM


Thanks WindWalker12,

Bones is very much a product of his environment.

Bobby

Earl Brinkman
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13 posted 2010-03-28 12:53 PM


Another interesting post in the Bones saga.  
Robert E. Jordan
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14 posted 2010-03-28 12:44 PM


Thanks Earl,

I'm pleased that you are enjoying the "Bones" series.

Thanks for the kind words.

Bobby

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15 posted 2010-03-29 03:25 AM


I've gotten used to Bones just the way he is.
                              Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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16 posted 2010-03-29 11:43 AM


Thanks dear Ida,

Bones doesn't change his ways very easily, so it's good that you like him just the way he is.

Love Bobby

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