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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-01-05 06:02 PM



Could We

Could I
hold you close
to my soul
and never
think about
letting you go...

Could you fulfil
all the desires
of my heart...

Could we be together
and never ever
find ourselves apart...

Would you allow me
to do that,
would you,
would I,
could we give it
our very best try?

JamesLee
01January
2010



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WindWalker12
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since 2009-10-17
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1 posted 2010-01-08 08:27 PM


This is a good one!
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2010-01-11 06:08 PM


Thank you WindWalker for the wonderful response...James
Gabriel Frost
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since 2002-08-15
Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts
3 posted 2010-01-13 07:14 PM


Delightful.Full of hope. I see that you dated it on new years day. At that very time my ex gf and i had just broken up, how coincidental it is, that i was thinking some of those same thoughts. Great read!
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