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viking_metal
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In a Jeep, Minnesota.

0 posted 2010-01-05 02:20 PM



welcome back, fire
let's make the world burn
blue and red and Paul.
ashes for breakfast
lunch
dinner.
ashes for everyone
assure yourself, they're free.
just follow the fire
get burned or be with me
light on fire
and change
change the way things seem to be.
_________________________________
Lame.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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1 posted 2010-01-06 02:45 PM


Beautifully captured.
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2010-01-06 05:38 PM


sweet
viking_metal
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3 posted 2010-01-06 08:24 PM


Thanks very much, poet and passing shadow.


I didn't like this when I wrote it and posted it, but it's growing on me.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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4 posted 2010-01-07 12:36 PM


Very nice, Paul.  I am following the trail of sparks.  They light up the night like sparklers or the tips of burning sticks.

A

viking_metal
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5 posted 2010-01-07 02:13 AM


Aliboo, my dearest Aliboo,

You never fail to post on a poem. That means mounds more than you probably think it does. I love having you. I am glad you enjoyed.


Paul

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

Alison
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6 posted 2010-01-12 11:58 PM


Thank you most kindly. Sometimes I even come back and read again -- even if they are lame!

A

viking_metal
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7 posted 2010-01-13 02:48 AM


You're a sweetheart. If cars could float or fly.

Fall in love early, fall in love often.

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