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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2010-01-05 08:21 AM


You stir in me
A thousand echoes
Of a thousand kisses
And a thousand tomorrows

Emotions in long decay
Ever by slow degrees
Never have I felt this way
You move me

You unlock in me
So much of desire
So much pain
In which we conspire

Memories betray innocence
Ever by slow degrees
Unafraid of the consequence
You move me

You instill in me
A taste for life renewing
A taste from depths
Of which is my undoing

Feelings long kept secret
Ever by slow degrees
Whatever it is, you do it
You move me

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2010-01-05 09:01 AM


Now this is sparkling!  The heart of a gentle man unfolds in your poetry, a treasure to behold for sure.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
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2 posted 2010-01-05 09:18 AM


this reads like a song

beautiful

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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
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3 posted 2010-01-14 08:55 AM


Emotions in long decay
Ever by slow degrees
Never have I felt this way
You move me

So very beautiful, my friend...

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