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WindWalker12
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since 2009-10-17
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0 posted 2010-01-05 01:13 AM


Are Humans Dumb?

I think this is a rhetorical question:
one only needs to review an election
to answer that! Yes, most people
at least on this benighted world
are certifiably dumb.

Time after time, people will go to the polls –
oh yes, less and less are conned into this
but still, they legitimize this enterprise
of putting liars, cheats, self-serving narcissists
in positions of power.

People give individuals with minds
comparable to those of egocentric feudal lords
power over all aspects of their lives –
and they do this of their own “free” will
thinking they have no choice.

And that’s the point, isn’t it:
do we have a choice or not?
Must we endure ignorant self-serving asses
as “governing” members of society
or can we do without them?
Let’s consider this question logically:
what would we need to get rid of “them”?

Well, we’d need to be absolutely certain
we are morally better than they are.
We’d have to be certain we truly care
about others and about our environment.
We’d have to know we can discipline ourselves,
not oppress our neighbour, not take advantage,
and be there when someone needs our help.

We’d have to obey the law; the laws;
we wouldn’t fight, cause unrest or be disorderly;
we wouldn’t be racist or misogynist –
sharing all the good things equally with all
regardless of class, gender, race.
Oh and most important of all:
we’d have to know that however provoked
we would not hate another – ever.

Well, that’s about it.
If, as a society of intelligent beings
we know we cannot meet these obligations
then we’d better continue to vote,
pay our rising taxes, accept the asses in power
and expect the ever growing worst.

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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1 posted 2010-01-06 06:17 PM


well stated!

particularly ...

"Well, we’d need to be absolutely certain
  we are morally better than they are.
  We’d have to be certain we truly care
  about others and about our environment.
  We’d have to know we can discipline ourselves,
  not oppress our neighbour, not take advantage,
  and be there when someone needs our help.

  We’d have to obey the law; the laws;
  we wouldn’t fight, cause unrest or be  
  disorderly;
  we wouldn’t be racist or misogynist –
  sharing all the good things equally with all
  regardless of class, gender, race.
  Oh and most important of all:
  we’d have to know that however provoked
  we would not hate another – ever."

applause for this social impact/conscience 'write' !

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2010-01-07 10:33 AM


Greetings, WW12

"Well, we’d need to be absolutely certain
we are morally better than they are.
We’d have to be certain we truly care
about others and about our environment.
We’d have to know we can discipline ourselves,
not oppress our neighbour, not take advantage,
and be there when someone needs our help.

We’d have to obey the law; the laws;
we wouldn’t fight, cause unrest or be disorderly;
we wouldn’t be racist or misogynist –
sharing all the good things equally with all
regardless of class, gender, race.
Oh and most important of all:
we’d have to know that however provoked
we would not hate another – ever."

~ Have you ever considered running for office?


EA

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
3 posted 2010-03-16 09:40 PM


This brings back memories of a novel that I read years ago called `Setting Free The Bears` in which two idealistic youths are determined to set free the animals that they believe are being exploited by society.  So they decide to free only the `safe` animals.  Needless to say their well intentions bring about chaoes and harm.  I think your last stanza seems to suggest the same.  That maybe it is better to live with the scoundrels that we are stuck with than to attempt to replace them without an  alternative.  So the best solution I believe is to go to the polls, vote the bad guys out and hope for the best.
gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
4 posted 2010-03-16 10:29 PM


I feel an intensely strident voice of exasperation here. What shall it be---out of the frying pan into the fire? or out of the fire into the frying pan? Do we no longer have a choice? Is there a Ben Franklin, or a Jefferson in the house! -- Great write, my friend, well considered, well crafted, and on the mark! Yours is a voice that needs to heard.

Art

Balladeer
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
5 posted 2010-03-16 11:31 PM


Extremely well said. We have met the enemy and they are....us!
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