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What Shticks |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Mind scattered ideas, plans, options splattered like throwing poo on a wall seeing what shticks hours in a chair opening windows windows windows multitasking, planning destinations, schools, living arrangements, jobs... too far in the future just yet a ppause a break to flirt with cyber profiles making friends in foreign lands a far off place something else to look forward to... train fares, air fares one way, round trip circle straight adventures, explorations before during after back in place what to do with this space move out, break lease suddenly suddenly feeling rushed to get out momentary feelings of solitude, sadness feelings of being exiled all my exes live in Texas no time to look back look forward counter attack find a new home sure about chosen school? contemplate this one, that one counting hours days waiting for acceptance and then... LAUNCH count down continues mounting tasks moving storage movers vacate a working vacation no time to be excited waiting waiting for acceptance settled inquired waiting to see what shticks... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You are developing an interesting style as you play with words. This reminded me of fast frenzy. So much - so fast and I just moved with the words. A |
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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Thanks Alison, this is exactly what my mind and life have been like recently.  |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You showed it well. A |
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