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Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2010-01-03 03:18 PM

O' Muse, it seems as if eternity
Hath passed me by, since last thee called my name,
Allowing me to soar; to heaven's flee,
To leave behind mine earthen bonds, to aim,
As archer's bow, an arrow at thine heart,
To pierce thy veil, so I, a mortal man,
Might with the angels sing, to thee impart,
The depths of love; the width of rapture's span,
Contained within mine soul for thee O' Muse,
Where hath thee gone, do not thee hear my call?
Why must I wait in solitude, refuse
Me not thy song O' Muse, I yearn thy thrall.
Alone I sit, and gaze to stars above,
I hear thee not, I hunger for thy love.

O' Muse, tho' oft thee quill of sorrow's bite,
Thy gentle song, springs forth as fragrant rose,
In radiant bloom, aglow in welkin's light,
As flows thy pen; of inner depths disclose.
To hear thy golden voice, thy pulchritude,
Allowest man, to touch upon night's sky.
Upon a oth resonate as Venus from on high,
An angel's harp, lets us thy heart intrude,
Allofar and distant star, thee weep,
Beyond the realm of mortal man, thy pain
Transcends across known bounds of time, to leap
Deep chasms of one's soul, with pain's refrain.
In thy sorrow, Fair Muse, doth heaven sing,
Splendor, on feathered grace of angel's wing.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2010-01-06 09:39 PM

Tim that is a thoroughly enjoyable well written poem my friend, which definately

warrants a lot more attention than it has been getting. Very well done. Take care.

Lindsay.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2010-01-06 10:16 PM

Sir,

Your writing has always been remarkable;
e'en though some might not comprehend
the magnitude.

While yours is looking, should s/he find mine, please send her packing toward home?

Always,

Your Sun

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2010-01-14 09:00 AM

They like to hide and pretend not to hear us calling... but this should have yours standing up and applauding. *S*

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

4 posted 2010-03-10 04:09 AM

Wow! This is one gem of a poem. I hope it gathers the readers that it deserves.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2010-03-12 07:45 PM

I must agree with Lindsay.........well done
Sir Tim.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2010-03-15 03:48 PM

Your muse must be hanging out with mine, Tim. Maybe you should forget the muse, you did a wonderful job here all by yourself.
Ida

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2010-03-15 04:37 PM

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

8 posted 2010-03-15 07:49 PM

wow, this is magnificent!!

This is a keeper, I'm saving it

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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