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vandana
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0 posted 2010-01-03 11:19 AM




For A Moment
For a moment
I was lost in time
With you
Here
Looking at myself
Finding myself in time
For a moment
Everything turned out good
and bad
When I am sad
I feel so lost in time
For a moment
Finding myself alone
In a dream
I could only dream of you and me
Together in love
Looking deep
At my dream
I cloudn't sleep
Because I was lost in a moment
With you


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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2010-01-03 12:59 PM


very romantic
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2010-01-03 03:57 PM


Dear vandana, may your dream become your reality!

"I could only dream of you and me
Together in love"

Love 'n hugs and wishes for a blessed new year!

Linda

www.lindadowd.com

Tim
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3 posted 2010-01-03 10:48 PM


I enjoyed your poem.
2islander2
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by the sea
4 posted 2010-01-05 01:18 PM


true words will be rewarded, thanks for the delicate poem.

yann

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
5 posted 2010-01-05 03:04 PM


vandana - very nice romantic write...

BC

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2010-01-06 11:16 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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