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jwesley
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0 posted 2010-01-03 01:44 AM


Remembering '74



I remember when you were soft and wonderful
beneath the lithe, suppleness of youth,
and everyday we fell in love again, exploring ourselves,
learning things we never knew,
and now you're soft and wonderful everywhere,
in layers you never had before,
and though we may not fall in love again, every day,
I love you every morning,
in the evening when we say good night -
I love you in a way that gets stronger and stronger
every time you look my way,
you touch my hand;
I love you as if you were still lithe and supple,
and we were learning things brand new,
I love the changes, the wrinkles, every strand of gray,
the years, the layers,
every day I open my eyes and see you there.
I remember when you were soft and wonderful -
I remember . . . I remember,
and I love you still, today.

~~~
©wesley james beard, jr.
january 2010

Terry and I were married Dec. 23, 1974. We marked 35 years last month and this  piece has been a part of many of them with all the heart, the emotion, and the  meaning still in tact.






© Copyright 2010 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2010-01-03 01:54 AM


James Wesley Beard, Jr. ~ husband, father, poet, friend, PiP publisher ... I look for your poetry and it makes me smile.

Thank you,
A

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2 posted 2010-01-03 06:01 PM


And what a wonderful way to feel. Go on doing what you do...

We married at 16, two months short of 17, and he one month into 21. Everyone said it would not last. We had 47 years together before cancer took his life. We sure fooled the unbeliving. Hoping you can go on longer, sharing your love together.  late.

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3 posted 2010-01-04 04:09 AM


Your love shines in every word, while touched the soul. I am married for 38 years now and I do recognize these feelings so well. Thank you for sharing


Charisma

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4 posted 2010-01-04 08:51 AM


Thank you for sharing what every woman would wish to hear~~

M

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5 posted 2010-01-04 11:39 AM


Jimmy! I love the man (and poet) that you are! I wish every woman on the face of this earth could be loved, honoured and cherished as you do your own wife. I also love the woman that she must be to have inspired the love that you have shown for her in this unforgettable anniversary poem of enduring adoration!

Sending much love to both of you and blessings for many, many more years of wedded bliss! God bless you!

Linda
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6 posted 2010-01-04 11:41 AM


Ooops! In my enthusiasm I forgot to save it!

SAVED  


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7 posted 2010-01-04 01:30 PM


darn, I thought I was gonna go for a walk down memory lane LOL

I was 5 back then...Atari, pogo sticks, unicycles, 8-tracks, and if I start listing music, I'll be here all day.

Still this is a beauty! Congrats on your 35 years my friend. Lucky people you two are!

LindsayP
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8 posted 2010-01-06 08:53 PM



Jimmy my good friend I know just how you feel, I have been married for 57 yesrs and

my wife is just as dear to me as she was on our wedding day. congratulations Jimmy, you are both very fortuneate. All the best.

Lindsay

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9 posted 2010-01-06 10:59 PM




Jimmy, this gives me goosebumps
and a big smile


congratulations a little late!


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10 posted 2010-01-14 03:08 PM


This is so very beautiful... congratulations to you both! *S*
Earl Brinkman
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11 posted 2010-04-20 10:56 PM


This is one gem of a poem.  Thanks for sharing.
Marchmadness
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12 posted 2010-04-21 02:22 AM


Wonderful sentiments, Jimmy.
                         Ida

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13 posted 2010-04-21 01:57 PM


February, '72 for me and I certainly get where you are coming from...It's nice, isn't it?  Those vows are really making sense about now, huh?
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14 posted 2010-04-22 01:20 PM


congrats guy..I was married in 71..and again in 73  and in 75 and 79 and oh damn..where is my calculator..
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15 posted 2010-04-22 05:43 PM


This is so romantic and sentimental.
Beautiful, just beautiful.
Your wife is a very lucky lady.

OwlSA
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16 posted 2010-04-26 03:44 PM


Hi Wesley

I don't think that you and your wife are lucky at all!  On the contrary, I think you have both chosen well, and then worked very hard and well at your marriage, and that you deserve every bit of the happiness you have.  Luck just doesn't come into it at all.

Owl

jwesley
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17 posted 2010-04-26 09:30 PM


Thanks to each of you for seeing and comment on this well-worn post. And yes, my wise 'Owl' friend...a lot of work goes into it, although I think luck or better came into play in the 'choosing' - we were married 3 months after our blind date meeting and both of us had told friends after that first date that we had met the one we were going to marry. I don't think either of us 'chose'...we were 'chosen!'.

j.

OwlSA
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18 posted 2010-04-27 04:47 PM


Wow!  What a lovely storybook romance to tell your children and grandchildren!

Owl

Lamar Cole
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19 posted 2010-04-27 05:21 PM


Very lovely sentiments.
JamesMichael
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20 posted 2010-04-30 09:42 PM


Fine writing...congratulations on the 35 years of marriage...James
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