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secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2010-01-02 08:28 PM

        deep celestial dream

Under the vast-eternal Milky way,
bare trees dance in clear-bright
  moonlit splendor
along a windswept mountain horizon.
On such a grand winter forest
  evening,
one may slip beyond all bonds
of the tumultuous hours
and ten thousand sorrows…
into a deep celestial dream.

            --- b. e. adams (1/2010)

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (01-02-2010 09:25 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2010-01-02 09:14 PM

Oh how lovely is this, slipping beyond all bonds and ten thousand sorrows.

YES!!

Brilliant poem, dreampoet!! I really enjoy reading you!!

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

2 posted 2010-01-03 03:24 AM

Bruce,

I am ready for bed and I am taking this poem with me to my dreams.

Thank you, my friend.

A

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2010-01-03 10:56 AM

Dear Bruce the Poet, this is truly a dreamy poem of the highest celestial order!

A fine writer, ye be! Love your work!

May you "slip beyond all bonds
of the tumultuous hours
and ten thousand sorrows" every night in 2010 ~ and beyond!

Linda
www.lindadowd.com

gilead
Senior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 1067
nevada, USA

4 posted 2010-01-03 03:32 PM

You speak for me, Bruce. I am in awe and wonder beneath the stars. Thanks--

Art

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

5 posted 2010-01-03 10:42 PM

always short and intriguing

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2010-01-06 11:07 PM

a visual delight Poet

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2010-01-07 03:23 AM

beautifully written and deep to share.

regards

yann

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2010-01-08 04:57 PM

This is a poem that should be like a mantra you could say to yourself before you fall to sleep at night and what wonders may be dreamed after reciting it....thank you for the words that may lead to a doorway of discovery..

Goldenrose.

WindWalker12
Member

since 2009-10-17

Posts 57

9 posted 2010-01-08 08:30 PM

You write suck wonderful poetry!!!!

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2010-01-12 05:08 PM

secondhanddreampoet - a suberb writing and I could feel the words as I read them...

BC

naturegirl
Member

since 2009-09-30

Posts 168
England

11 posted 2010-02-10 11:48 AM

I revisted this as again as your opening title captivated me once more, pulling me into your wonderfully descriptive words, smiling in wonder. You capture the grandeur & scale so beautifully, you know one of those moments when you grin & feel the tears pricking the back of your eyes. Thank you for a wonderful poem & for sharing it with us.

Julie x

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2010-02-10 11:35 PM

A wonderful poem to read before bed.
Ida

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

13 posted 2010-02-13 02:40 AM

We need that dream, occasionally
and banish all sorrows
to somewhere else
even for a while...

It's therapeutic.

Well done.

CG

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