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SilhouetteMarquis
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0 posted 2010-01-02 05:50 PM


Welcome, stranger tangent
Would it be a wish
That bells and qualms cloture?
Protuberance focused, gusto hardened
Below where color goes
And far below where summer spent
Hours contemplating
Shelf space for the gold
Might the autumn be that brazen

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2010-01-02 06:00 PM


Indeed!  Yes, autumn would be so brazen!
Excellent first post.  Welcome to Passions.
Enjoyable style you have going on here.

Bill Charles
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2 posted 2010-01-02 06:32 PM


SilhouetteMarquis - a brazen autumn leading into a magical winter...

BC

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2010-01-10 04:48 AM


I love how you use words in this poem.  They really make your poem - and it's a fine poem too.

Alison

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