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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-01-21 11:40 AM




She let her goddess go
in pale moon shimmer
Smiling midnight
against her skin
starlight dancing
upon her hair
Her essence radiant
and rare
to see
Bewitching
if you glimpse
her

LGR(C)1/21/12

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-01-21 11:46 AM


And I will bet he is doing some heavy glimpsing, Lori. You do know how to get your point across in your poetry.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just for surviving a long time ago ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2012-01-21 11:49 AM


Thanks Jerry

Lori

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California
3 posted 2012-01-21 01:40 PM


Tantalyzing words.  What mere mortals would dare aspire to glimpse such as this?

Michael

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2012-01-21 05:41 PM


Go to the new thread #48

No one here... but us chickens!


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
5 posted 2012-01-21 07:55 PM


I see this, very lovely content here
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