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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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When I drift off to sleep
when I open my eyes
you are there
When I have a moment
on my mind
unencumbered
I find you waiting
with your love
for me
It abounds
and surrounds me
assuredly
I am yours to keep
inside my sighs
I wear
when I have a moment
on my mind
unencumbered

LGRę1/20/12
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JerryPat2
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1 posted 01-20-2012 10:11 AM       View Profile for JerryPat2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat2's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat2

Whoa! I love the unencumberedness of this, and the way you are telling your man in no uncertain words how you feel. I imagine he feels the same toward you,

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 01-20-2012 10:19 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I imagine so too Jerry   Thanks

Lori
Kit McCallum
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What a beautiful way to express the lingering way a loved one stays within your thoughts. Very much enjoyed this Lori.

Best wishes,
/Kit
 
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