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Saying what should be said.....so listen

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twistedpup
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0 posted 01-19-2012 09:29 PM       View Profile for twistedpup   Email twistedpup   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for twistedpup


The things I do see
The way you still look at me when we watch tv
The way you get up even when ur achey
The way you still kiss me in my front seat
The way you sometimes just wanna hold me
The way you make me laugh,even when you're not trying
The way you have a tear on your cheek,
but you say you're not crying

The things I feel
The way you kiss me when i arrive and before i leave
The Way you look into my eyes when you say you love me
The way you hold my hand for no reason
The way you smile every time we meet
The way you frown when I have to leave
The way you watch as I drive away
The way we both wish I could stay

Everything else I didnt say
There are some things that need to change
There are some things that can stay the same
That no matter the distance
near or far
You,my hero,my soulmate,
will always have my heart.


*hugs*

[This message has been edited by twistedpup (01-19-2012 10:19 PM).]

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JL
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1 posted 01-19-2012 09:42 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Very nice write!

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

twistedpup
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2 posted 01-21-2012 11:19 PM       View Profile for twistedpup   Email twistedpup   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twistedpup

thank you

*hugs*

ebonygirl
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3 posted 01-28-2012 03:35 PM       View Profile for ebonygirl   Email ebonygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ebonygirl

Enjoyed your poem.
I hope they heard you and listened carefully because your words are loud and clearly wonderful. A little sad that you have to leave from time to time. Hopefully you'll be able to stay forever.
Ms. E
 
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