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Dead romance

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twistedpup
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0 posted 01-19-2012 06:17 PM       View Profile for twistedpup   Email twistedpup   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for twistedpup


Like the skeleton of a fish decaying on the beach.
No meat just brittle bones and two hazey eyes staring at you.
Longing for the refreshing waters from where it came.
This romance is the same.
Our conversations have no meat.
Argueing constantly.
Like our feelings mean nothing.
We use threats of leaving, yelling and blaming.
Words over open wounds,like salt stinging.
Longing for a refreshing drink of what we used to be.
Does this mean anything?
Don't you see this is nothing like it was.
All of it just seeming so lost.

Where once understanding stood
now just a reflection
of the affection that once was.
Now seeming alone at night
no longer a priority to wish
sweet dreams
just a txt seeming so empty
It takes an argument to say i love you
or you love me.

Like a fish decayed on the beach
this romance has no meat.
Just brittle bones and hazey eyes left wondering
Do you see what i see?


*hugs*

[This message has been edited by twistedpup (01-19-2012 09:16 PM).]

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JL
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1 posted 01-19-2012 09:58 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

"It takes an argument to say i love you
or you love me.

Like a fish decayed on the beach
this romance has no meat.
Just brittle bones and hazey eyes left wondering
Do you see what i see?"


Heartbreaking!
Very bad situation, but you composed
the emotion so well.

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

OwlSA
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2 posted 01-20-2012 02:02 AM       View Profile for OwlSA   Email OwlSA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OwlSA

Exquisite poem, twistedpup, though I feel your pain.  Don't really (just a little though) mean to be punny, but my unasked for opinion is that if you are wise and strong, you will leave him rotting on the shore and consider the other fish in the sea, as difficult as that may be for you at the present moment.  There are many beautiful varieties.  Sorry if you find my comment offensive.  It was meant to be supportive and wise.  Smiles.

Owl
twistedpup
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3 posted 01-20-2012 04:55 AM       View Profile for twistedpup   Email twistedpup   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for twistedpup

thank you all so much infact he got to hear this poem and he was woken up.

also no offense taken

*hugs*

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 01-20-2012 08:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Pup...enjoyed your pen as usual...cool bindings on your pen here
 
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