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lipstick & soup reflections

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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-19-2012 06:28 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


that passing by in my minds hallway
and you were scattered in dreams
pretending your fingers were blinds
and you peeked between them quietly

you left your finger paints out again
and I drew pictures of hearts and flowers
but you smeared them together like soup
and then made lip prints in the middle

you kissed the mirrors over your secrets
then just stood there with nothing on
but nothing showing either on purpose
so I would have to get in between you

and your reflections, to finally wear you

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1 posted 01-19-2012 06:41 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Well, hello lovely...A girl could wake up to this kind of poetry, for sure.
bel1e
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2 posted 01-19-2012 07:14 AM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

man, how I love fingerpaint.  This is...just lovely~

             

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3 posted 01-19-2012 07:54 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Nicole..thank you for peeking in ms

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BBBel1e, thank you daughter...for smearing the walls with happy faces.
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4 posted 01-19-2012 07:54 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

and you were scattered in dreams
pretending your fingers were blinds
and you peeked between them quietly

Soup just became the number one choice for any meal. LOL Loved this!
Dark Stranger
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5 posted 01-19-2012 07:57 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms suthern...you always smile me with your reply.  Thanks lady
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6 posted 01-19-2012 12:46 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

you kissed the mirrors over your secrets
then just stood there with nothing on


Funny, I just commented an article of DailyOM about "being naked" and here you are with your own rendering of a moment of nakedness and how wonderfully poetic it is... Mirrors witness truth and a kiss like this seals the beauty of secrets .

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7 posted 01-19-2012 01:32 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms Mar...thank you lady for the special eyes

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