lipstick & soup reflections

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Open Poetry #47

lipstick & soup reflections

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

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West Coast

0 posted 2012-01-19 06:28 AM

that passing by in my minds hallway
and you were scattered in dreams
pretending your fingers were blinds
and you peeked between them quietly

you left your finger paints out again
and I drew pictures of hearts and flowers
but you smeared them together like soup
and then made lip prints in the middle

you kissed the mirrors over your secrets
then just stood there with nothing on
but nothing showing either on purpose
so I would have to get in between you

and your reflections, to finally wear you

___________

daark

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

1 posted 2012-01-19 06:41 AM

Well, hello lovely...A girl could wake up to this kind of poetry, for sure.

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

2 posted 2012-01-19 07:14 AM

man, how I love fingerpaint. This is...just lovely~

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2012-01-19 07:54 AM

Ms Nicole..thank you for peeking in ms

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BBBel1e, thank you daughter...for smearing the walls with happy faces.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-19 07:54 AM

and you were scattered in dreams
pretending your fingers were blinds
and you peeked between them quietly

Soup just became the number one choice for any meal. LOL Loved this!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2012-01-19 07:57 AM

ms suthern...you always smile me with your reply. Thanks lady

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2012-01-19 12:46 PM

you kissed the mirrors over your secrets
then just stood there with nothing on

Funny, I just commented an article of DailyOM about "being naked" and here you are with your own rendering of a moment of nakedness and how wonderfully poetic it is... Mirrors witness truth and a kiss like this seals the beauty of secrets

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Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2012-01-19 01:32 PM

ms Mar...thank you lady for the special eyes

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