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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa

0 posted 2012-01-18 03:01 PM


It’s not as if I dropped love
on the ground to ne’er be found
it simply found its way into
the drama of their lives.

Ignored it thinks to maybe be
a parrot trained to not ere talk
or perhaps a homeless vagabond
with nought to bring to the party.

And so it studies and ponders
each and every drama
making notes by the score
until it simply is no more.

But that’s not true because, you see
it simply came right back to me!

Helen / 18 January 2012


© Copyright 2012 Helen - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2012-01-18 03:31 PM


In other words, Helen, what goes around comes around.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2012-01-18 03:40 PM


I guess so, Jerry - eventually.  Thanks for the read.
JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-01-19 04:59 PM


"But that’s not true because, you see
it simply came right back to me!"

Right where it belongs!
Nice pondering in this,
you know: "Not as if..."

Enjoyed the read.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2012-01-19 10:00 PM


Thanks for "popping in" JL.
Michael
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5 posted 2012-01-20 05:37 PM


I've been told to read the "love chapter" in the bible, substituting your name for "love" at every occurence.  Quite an eye opening experience it proved to be, not only revealing the traits in me that were not love based, but the traits in others that are.  Love is even more beautiful when recognized for all it truly is... And yes, it often comes back to you.  Very enjoyable read.

Michael

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2012-01-21 11:26 AM


Loved this my friend...loved the ending especially!!

j.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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7 posted 2012-01-24 03:14 PM


Love is an entity all in its own and cannot be told what to do....;0)

Lovely write from a lovely lady

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
8 posted 2012-01-24 03:25 PM


Thanks everyone!  LeeJ - I have fairly recently come to the very same conclusion.  I just wish it was more flexible though and able to move more easily from one ... what? ... "desire" to the next.  Training school for love that is for sure.  
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