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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-18-2012 06:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


I could hear what you said with your eyes
when they wrote those words on my skin slowly
making perfect letters like from mouths
leaving a kiss on a window for some tomorrow

you said it was a list under construction
everything I could imagine you imagining
and then reciting like a pledge of allegiance
not to the flag but to the pole you slid down

when there was a fire and you had water enough
to make everything keep burning for hours
and you said you liked that urgency better
than ironing your proper gloves after praying

and some day you would touch me without them


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ice
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1 posted 01-18-2012 09:23 AM       View Profile for ice   Email ice   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ice

Fine romantic, sesual poetry...well done as always, DS.

Maybe one should never hope for the gloves to come off? Perhaps it might end the sensual journey, and then there would be nothing to look forward to, in a sexual progressive way...A hiding of the hand may enhance the intrigue..The feminine mystique, to me is arousing.

Loved this poem
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 01-18-2012 09:55 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Iceamigo..10/4 on the gloves...they don't have to wear anything else at all if they don't want to..just the gloves..geeze that sounded cheeky huh..thanks guy
bel1e
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3 posted 01-18-2012 10:34 AM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

I'm still stuck on the flagpole comment....

LOL

~*~love how you do naughty, daddy dear~*~

             

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BBBel1e...you would stick to that huh...thanks little one
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Nicole
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You would hide the gloves anyway.  lol
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 01-19-2012 06:10 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Nicole..shhhhhhhhh..that was a secret.  Thanks lady
Margherita
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Your mind is fascinating, I said that before no doubt, but what you do with words (and imagery) is not just amazing, it is like the discovery of a new island, that has never been there, and was ejected by a volcano that can't be seen. A surprise gift somehow.

Margherita
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Ms Mar, thank you for your blessing glances lady friend..
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