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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-01-17 05:20 PM


There are
Those days
That vex you
Like a
Cauldron boiling
Cheap California
Wine time

©January 17, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
JL
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1 posted 2012-01-17 05:29 PM


"There are
Those
That
Like
Cauldron
Cheap
Wine"

Nice write JerryPat2!
Sorry, I couldn't help myself...

JL


Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-17 05:34 PM


Yeah you right, JL, I'm one of them . . . Thanks for passing the taste-test along . . .

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JL
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3 posted 2012-01-17 05:37 PM


I like cheap wine too.  Sorry I saw a second message in your write.

California Red for me.  $5 a gallon...
Heeeheeeeee...
JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-01-17 06:11 PM


Burgundy $10.95 1.5 Liter

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Honeybunch
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5 posted 2012-01-17 07:35 PM



JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-01-17 07:37 PM


Hah! Thanks, Honeybunch. Come on over, I think I have enough. Haha!!

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Nicole
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7 posted 2012-01-17 08:45 PM


I am feeling that vexation today; hah scoot over sug, I'll bring some too and we can all share.
JerryPat2
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8 posted 2012-01-17 09:06 PM


Heehee I'm scooting, Nicole, I'm scooting . . . Thank you for joining the party . . .

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Margherita
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9 posted 2012-01-18 05:20 AM


That can happen, Jerry! Great condensation of mood rendering.

You also reminded me of dragging home yesterday a bottle of 1,5 l of "Nero d'Avola", red Sicilian wine for my two men ... Euro 3,05! In the store next to my home it is Euro 4,07!! The intent was to economize, but it was also exercise! (Walking and carrying weight)

Margherita

JerryPat2
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10 posted 2012-01-18 05:52 AM


Seems the wine industry thrives within the poetical community, Margherita. Thanks for stopping by with your two bottles. Heehee

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ice
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11 posted 2012-01-18 09:26 AM


Oh, I have had that kind of wine..
it comes in a twist top bottle, or in a juice box.

Wonderful, how just a few words can spark the interest of many people..poetry does that I guess...I guess that's why I love it.

JerryPat2
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12 posted 2012-01-18 09:35 AM


Yep. Twist top is correct, Ice, give that man a . . . Ah, what do you give a person who has everything.

Thank you for stopping and reading my fifteen little words, it is appreciated.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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13 posted 2012-01-18 12:38 PM


yesterday must have been one of those days... Party? did someone say party? Count me in!


Lori

JerryPat2
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14 posted 2012-01-18 01:05 PM


Yeah, Lori, it most certainly wound up being one of those days. Thanks for stopping by.

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15 posted 2012-01-18 06:54 PM


Do you have an extra glass of that? *S* If so... fill 'er up, please! *S*
JerryPat2
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16 posted 2012-01-18 07:43 PM


You betcha, *S* come on in qnd have a seat. Thanks for stopping by.

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jwesley
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17 posted 2012-01-18 07:54 PM


Got plastered - uh, way beyond Plastered
on cheap wine (Thunderbird - 25 cents a bottle) laying on the beach with a bunch of other sailors almost under the roller coaster at The Pike in Long Beach, Calif., way back in the early '60's ...

Haven't been able to stomach, and can barely stand the smell of wine, any wine, since.

Sometimes I really feel I'm missing something...(ha!! not really)

Liked the write and the memory it brought!!

j.


JerryPat2
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18 posted 2012-01-18 08:00 PM


I was there in the early sixties, j. I wasn't a sailor, I was a vagabond, but I was there. Had a few swallows of Thunderbird too, but I was into Beam and water and whatever kind of speed I could score. Thanks for stopping by, man.

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