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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-17-2012 06:35 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger


you were lovely with your glass eyes of dawn
not letting them show too much expression
wearing that on your lips instead, as a smile
pretending you didn't really read my mind

although you recognized the words there
and said sometimes you would whisper them
when no one was around to hear you wanting
or as you liked to call it, almost needing

we wrote them in the sand sometimes, slowly
you took my hands in yours so I could guide
and you could pretend it was not your feelings
that made you into that liquid refreshment

you said you hoped I could never get enough of

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1 posted 01-17-2012 08:48 AM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

simmering summer days and tiny cocktail umbrellas....hell yeah



~digging you, dark man~

             

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2 posted 01-17-2012 09:32 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

BBBel1e...always a pleasure to have you glancing river side.  Thanks little one
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Almost needing... I like that.  Some people are an exercise in patience, I reckon.
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4 posted 01-17-2012 10:44 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Nicole...thanks lady...they say anything worth drooling on is worth waiting for..or something like that..
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5 posted 01-18-2012 01:18 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

One thing about that sand writing is the tide erases it and we can pretend the words were never written .. forgetting that they were cc'ed on our souls.  Or something pseudo profound like that.

I just know I like it.  Yep.

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Ms Ali-san...but the sand always remembers..thank you babe
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