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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-17 06:35 AM



you were lovely with your glass eyes of dawn
not letting them show too much expression
wearing that on your lips instead, as a smile
pretending you didn't really read my mind

although you recognized the words there
and said sometimes you would whisper them
when no one was around to hear you wanting
or as you liked to call it, almost needing

we wrote them in the sand sometimes, slowly
you took my hands in yours so I could guide
and you could pretend it was not your feelings
that made you into that liquid refreshment

you said you hoped I could never get enough of

____________

daark

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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-17 08:48 AM


simmering summer days and tiny cocktail umbrellas....hell yeah



~digging you, dark man~

             

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-01-17 09:32 AM


BBBel1e...always a pleasure to have you glancing river side.  Thanks little one
Nicole
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3 posted 2012-01-17 10:39 AM


Almost needing... I like that.  Some people are an exercise in patience, I reckon.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-17 10:44 AM


Ms Nicole...thanks lady...they say anything worth drooling on is worth waiting for..or something like that..
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5 posted 2012-01-18 01:18 AM


One thing about that sand writing is the tide erases it and we can pretend the words were never written .. forgetting that they were cc'ed on our souls.  Or something pseudo profound like that.

I just know I like it.  Yep.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2012-01-18 06:28 AM


Ms Ali-san...but the sand always remembers..thank you babe
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