When you fall in love, memories.

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Open Poetry #47

When you fall in love, memories.

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

0 posted 2012-01-16 08:59 PM

When you fall in love you know
the feeling of butterflys when he is near.
Something you were to afraid to say,
but you knew he wanted to hear.
Now you tell him everyday,
even though when he kisses you
you still shy way.
Hiding your face in his chest.
When you look up you notice the smile
you fell in love with.
You will ever forget the place
you first saw his face.
Now when you lay in his arms,
you whisper please dont let go.
For everytime you leave,
your eyes fill with tears.
Until the next time,
when he is near.

*hugs*

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2012-01-16 09:33 PM

I can absolutely, one hundred percent, totally, and without reservation . . . relate!

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

twistedpup
Member

since 2011-02-25

Posts 115

2 posted 2012-01-17 12:17 PM

This poem was actually inspired by a poem written to me in 2011 by porky118, it was called the one.

You can look it up on here and read it if you would like.

And thanks for the feedback!

*hugs*

porky118
Junior Member

since 2011-03-31

Posts 15
minnesota

3 posted 2012-01-17 12:25 PM

babe this is a amazing piece you have written loves you and keep up the good work

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