Except for the confusion of this line, Juju, "Hands buried with in the sand" I completely understand this poem. Oh, I thing the line I pointed out isn't confusing after all. Maybe the line should have been read, "Hands buried within the sand." It was the separation of "with" and "in" that confused me. Sorry.
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LOVE this, Juju! I can understand the fear of the eagle (although I am too stupid to understand the fear of the child) but, OH, so OH, I feel the awe and the momentary bond - as strong as steel and as sensitive as a thread of a spider's web - of the eagle and the child. How do I stop reading your poem? Did you set it on permanent repeat?
Member Rara Avis
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