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mvvenkataraman
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0 posted 2012-01-16 07:26 AM




Peace is a precious possession
Which is God's kind concession

Love will promote peace of mind
So for peace, try to be very kind

Peace may elude if we are cruel
As hatred supports devils in duel

Peace can be got in many ways
But, it comes when one prays

God is us the supplier of happiness
But, for that he demands kindness

If in mind, devils are forbidden
By nothing, peace can be hidden

Peace is the food which mind loves
As peace creates home out of house

Peace can be easily manufactured
Due to peace, mind is not fractured

Flower, baby and mother can invent
Colossal peace which is permanent

If peace you lack, life is a flop
If peace you have, you only top.

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Margherita
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1 posted 2012-01-16 09:43 AM


Love will promote peace of mind
So for peace, try to be very kind


I agree. This is good poetic advice.

Margherita

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2 posted 2012-01-17 09:33 AM


If peace you lack, life is a flop

Amen to that! *S* I like these reflections! *S*

mvvenkataraman
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3 posted 2012-01-17 10:26 AM


Dear respected Margherita,

Thank you for your appreciation
I will try to write like this
You have given me confidence
I will create agreeable poems.

With best wishes, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman

mvvenkataraman
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4 posted 2012-01-17 10:28 AM


Dear respected suthern,

Your comments give me hope
My mind feels rejuvenated
I must thank you for this
I will continue to write.

With best wishes, Yours truly,

mvvenkataraman

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