navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Such Moments as This
Open Poetry #47
Post A Reply Post New Topic Such Moments as This Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2012-01-15 05:46 PM


      Such Moments as This

Beneath an inscrutable moon and
black-velvet star field tapestry,
pure and wondrous forms
shadow-dance in the uncertain
moonlit splendor just before dawn,
like diaphanous spirits floating
  in and out of our dreams.
What price could be placed
on this mystic Winter forest and
such moments as this, stolen
  from Time,
or the finest memories of Love
that silently walk with us here.

             --- b. e. adams (1/15/2012)



© Copyright 2012 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-01-15 06:32 PM


This is a very romantic piece of work. The elements, described so eloquently, only added zest to love's memories.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2012-01-15 06:36 PM


Etheral and beautiful. Poetry at it's finest.
                        Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2012-01-16 05:41 AM


Exquisite, Bruce!

Margherita

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2012-01-16 01:38 PM


I can see this beauty in fine and perfect detail, Bruce, so clearly do you paint it.

Owl

ebonygirl
Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
5 posted 2012-01-17 12:24 PM


Beautiful,
Ms. E

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #47 » Such Moments as This

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary