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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2012-01-13 12:50 PM



She spread her delicate deliberately
where he could see
Her intention to entice
naughty from nice
With her low cut style
and a wicked smile
she’d flash his direction
to get his attention
She wanted more than his eye
and she wasn’t the least bit shy
about body talking
with her undulated walking
She wanted to hook up
If he would just look up
So she stepped up wind
her scent to send
down upon him
She assaulted his senses
disarming his defenses
Took one look to get him
never knew what hit him
He got lost in her hunger
It made him feel younger
to feel  her urgent
take his spent
so eagerly
And she didn’t quit
or slow down a bit
until she ‘d had her way
with him that day
She let him recover
And then said “Lover,
keep an eye out for me.
There is still more to see.”

LGR©1/13/12



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-01-13 12:59 PM


Damn! If she gets tired of him . . . er . . . ahem . . . maybe . . .

One sensuous piece of work, Lori.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2012-01-13 01:09 PM


Thanks Jerry, ahem you already have a girlfriend...er..a....if she gets tired of you....You can read this poem as many times as you want!


Lori

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2012-01-13 03:30 PM


OH! Darn!!
I think I met this girl out  
in Oakland...
Whew...

I need a smoke-


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2012-01-13 08:10 PM


LOL JL You crack me up! Thanks


Lori

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