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Alison
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0 posted 01-13-2012 12:05 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alison

shoodle-doodles
   danced
into the belly
of sunlit beams
while segregated panes
warmed them and
Sunlight imprisoned
them forever


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Alison


[This message has been edited by Alison (01-14-2012 06:08 PM).]

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1 posted 01-13-2012 01:14 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Rich in imagination. You have captured those "shoodle doodles" so well, Alison.
                                Ida
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2 posted 01-13-2012 01:26 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Thank you, dear Ida.

A
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3 posted 01-13-2012 06:39 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms Ali-san...not sure how to respond...just pretend I said something clever

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-13-2012 08:48 AM).]

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4 posted 01-13-2012 09:02 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

I can visualize this spectacle of light  and love to linger in its warmth.

A celestial cupcake, ecco!

Hugs.
Margherita
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5 posted 01-13-2012 01:43 PM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

love how this lights up the page~

             

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6 posted 01-13-2012 03:09 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Ah-Ha!
I remember Shoodle-Doodles
from "The Kitchen Table"
Which you posted a few years ago.
I also remember trying to
find the definition of a Shoodle-Doodle.  
Had me smiling then, and now.
Enjoyed!!
Too darn cute...

JL


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Maranatha!

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Daark - you are always clever.  Thank you.

ms ali-san
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8 posted 01-13-2012 05:12 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Beautiful Margherita -

I know you always see beauty ... Or do it seems.  This makes you very special to me.

xoxoxo
Alison
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9 posted 01-13-2012 05:15 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Baby Girl ~. Thank you so so much!!!

A
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10 posted 01-13-2012 05:21 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Dear JL ...

Wow!  How did you EVER remember "The Kitchen Table" & the Shoodle-Doodles?  You deserve to hear the story, my dear friend

When I was a baby I would sit in the sun beam that came through the window.  I would try to catch the dust that danced in the light.  I called them Shoodle-Doodles.

So see - this is an original Alison word.  Thank you - you brought me much joy today!

Xoxoxo
Alison ~ lover of Shoodle-Doodles
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11 posted 01-13-2012 10:03 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

NO!  
You brought ME joy with that cute
little story.
Thank you for sharing.

JL

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12 posted 01-14-2012 01:46 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I...was hoping the definition of shoodle-doodles would come out in the replies.     What a truly awesome word.  This made me feel the sun, and match it in like kind with a smile.
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I could see this clearly in my mind as I read.  Almost a deja vu effect.I'll admit the title had me thinking of snicker doodles dancing into my belly before I read the poem, though.

  Nicely done.  

Michael
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JL



A

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Nicole

Thank you from my heart.

xoxoxo
A

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Michael,

My very favorite cookies are Snickerdoodles.  They are the first cookie I learned to bake.  Loved them so much I named my first cat Snicerdoodle when I was five.  Thank you so much!

xoxoxo
A
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15 posted 01-15-2012 05:07 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Haahaaahaaaa!
A, You are hypnotizing me with that spinning smiley face...
You're the Egg McMuffin® of poetry.

JL

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16 posted 01-16-2012 01:28 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I love the name and love the poem (and love snickerdoodles, too! LOL) This is a smile maker! *S*
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And Shoodle-Doodles, Snickerdoodles and I love you too, suthern!

xoxoxo
A
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JL

Look into my eyes.   Look into my eyes .. Look into ..



MY EYES



A
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19 posted 01-16-2012 02:33 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

((( )))


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JL

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I love dust motes...
they have a life that
only Horton might hear,
yet they sparkle for all...





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21 posted 01-16-2012 11:52 PM       View Profile for ebonygirl   Email ebonygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ebonygirl

I like your new word.
Enjoyed,
Ms. E
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22 posted 01-18-2012 01:20 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Who?  Horton?  As in Horton hatches a Who?  Love it, Karilea.  xoxoxo

A

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Ms E

My language is sprinkled with Alison words.  Thank you for enjoying.

xoxo
A
 
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