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Tomer
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0 posted 01-11-2012 07:13 AM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tomer


She was touching a long part of her elbow
that touched the ground
like the rocks before the mud
that changed colors as the rain
hit the soft tinges of its face

She wrote on her heart
for life's pleasantries could not be of bother

There's a small window we all go to
where our thoughts become so isolated
that the trees begin to waver with their long, tusk branches

For the heart is our greatest pain
not tears of the skin,
the sun, or the dreaded floor

A heart is where the mind can roam
where a small window can touch
a persons face in such an organic way
that pictures are left as the only witness
to the faceless window and a lovers silence.
© Copyright 2012 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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1 posted 01-11-2012 10:19 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

I'm beginning to sound redundant in my replies; but this is simply amazing.

"For the heart is our greatest pain
not tears of the skin,
the sun, or the dreaded floor"
Tomer
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2 posted 01-12-2012 02:31 PM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tomer

Nicole,

I appreciate your admiration.  Hope you're well

Cheers
JamesMichael
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3 posted 01-12-2012 05:20 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Enjoyed...James
EmmaRose
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4 posted 01-15-2012 04:06 PM       View Profile for EmmaRose   Email EmmaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EmmaRose

There is good stuff in here
much valued by this reader
ebonygirl
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5 posted 01-16-2012 11:55 PM       View Profile for ebonygirl   Email ebonygirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ebonygirl

Always enjoy your poems, Tomer.
Ms. E
Tomer
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6 posted 01-18-2012 11:01 PM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tomer

James,

Happy you enjoyed.  Hope you're doing well, friend.

Cheers
Tomer
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7 posted 01-18-2012 11:02 PM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tomer

Emma,

I appreciate your forthright insight into this piece.  Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers
Tomer
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8 posted 01-18-2012 11:03 PM       View Profile for Tomer   Email Tomer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tomer

Ms. E,

And I always enjoy reading your comments.  Hope you're well.

Cheers
 
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