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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England 
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moving in unison hot breath condensed in chill air. limbs straining, dull thuds magnified in their ears. muffled screams of delight pierce the air. keeping time, pacing together, slap of leather, sweating flesh. estatic, jubilant, flying first past the post. hats flung like confetti, horse and rider, deified. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Kauto Star & Ruby Walsh making history by winning the King George VI Chase for the 5th time! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You caught this so very well! Margherita  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sounds like a cowgirl, barrel racing. Enjoyed. Nice writing naturegirl. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Excellent write, my friend! j. |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
Thanks for your kind replies. JL. Barrel racing sounds great fun! |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh I love this and was there with you. And your profile picture is the best! Alison |
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naturegirl Member
since 2009-09-30
Posts 168England |
thanks for your support & yes there is nothing like standing in the sea in northern England in winter.Brrrr. Makes you scream with laughter.... or shock not quite sure which! |
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