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naturegirl
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0 posted 01-09-2012 08:44 PM       View Profile for naturegirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for naturegirl

moving in unison
hot breath condensed
in chill air.
limbs straining, dull
thuds magnified in
their ears. muffled
screams of delight
pierce the air.
keeping time, pacing
together, slap of
leather, sweating flesh.
estatic, jubilant, flying
first past the
post. hats flung
like confetti, horse
and rider, deified.
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Kauto Star & Ruby Walsh making history by winning the King George VI Chase for the 5th time!
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Margherita
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1 posted 01-10-2012 07:03 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

You caught this so very well!

Margherita
JL
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2 posted 01-10-2012 06:48 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

Sounds like a cowgirl, barrel racing.
Enjoyed.
Nice writing naturegirl.

JL

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jwesley
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3 posted 01-10-2012 07:33 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Excellent write, my friend!

j.
naturegirl
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4 posted 01-11-2012 11:12 AM       View Profile for naturegirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for naturegirl

Thanks for your kind replies.
JL. Barrel racing sounds great fun!
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5 posted 01-14-2012 01:42 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Oh I love this and was there with you.  And your profile picture is the best!

Alison
naturegirl
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6 posted 01-18-2012 07:43 PM       View Profile for naturegirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for naturegirl

thanks for your support & yes there is nothing like standing in the sea in northern England in winter.Brrrr. Makes you scream with laughter.... or shock not quite sure which!  
 
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