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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 01-09-2012 09:00 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Stranger

we were the limbs of the joy tree
entwined with our urges between
using words we found at random
but they fit our needs with gloving

you said it was cold against you
that wall of your protective caution
so I slipped in between you there
where you were wearing my exposure

you looked at me with your eyes
but touched me with your mind ends
leaning over my boldest gifting
and hurting yourself slowly often

I mentioned you wore lovely colors
you changed back into blush again
but didn't wear it for very long
as you said what we had between us

should always be only our sin skins


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daark


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Nicole
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1 posted 01-09-2012 08:52 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Who knew something cold could be that warm.   I like how you paint her.
tracie66
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2 posted 01-10-2012 04:59 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

great read! love the interesting visual.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
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3 posted 01-10-2012 06:22 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Ms Nicole, thank you lady friend

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Ms Tracie, thank you for the eyes on this one
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4 posted 01-10-2012 10:12 AM       View Profile for bel1e   Email bel1e   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for bel1e

seductive as ever, Dark One~*~*~

XOXO

             

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 01-10-2012 10:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

Thanks BBGirl..
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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 01-16-2012 12:26 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

You often tell a story in just a line... Here, it took a while for me to get past the first line... for memories slapped my face and dragged me under... and then I had to mourn joy all over again... and I've already attended its funeral too many times. *S* But I'm glad I fought the fight and persevered to read the more... you had more stories to tell and I appreciate them all. *S*
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we were the limbs of the joy tree
entwined with our urges between


Such an enchanted tree scene you paint with your words, dear D.!

Margherita
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ms suthern, thank you special lady

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ms mar, thank youi lady, friend
EmmaRose
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9 posted 01-16-2012 12:32 PM       View Profile for EmmaRose   Email EmmaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EmmaRose

we were the limbs of the joy tree
entwined with our urges between
using words we found at random
but they fit our needs with gloving

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No gloves needed on these bareback branches
when you tickle my leaves in all the
right places
Dark Stranger
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ms Rose..thanks lady friend
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11 posted 01-18-2012 01:30 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

You say tell the story so well.  You know I love how you use words.

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ms ali-san, thank you lady
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