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father of the wind
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father of the wind |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
There was a desert we use to walk through when the sun came through like the dry heat that stung through the air long curls riding down my shoulder with your arm around my neck father, step by step When the heat reached the Dead Sea you were near me with the salt at our knees you held my head to the sky to the cosmic wonders that rode through the starry sky as we invited ourselves for dinner that night Just you and I the land you buried your feet in when you use to play as the rockets sailed by The place you called home is now mine to follow and the desert feels our skin every time we walk together in the summer wind Father, my eyes come from you. |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
This...is poetry. This is the kind of free-verse I wish I could come up with. Enjoyed the visuals. |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Nicole, I have seen some of your writings and they are beautiful. Thank you for the compliment. Take care Cheers |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
I am taken by your poetry, Tomer, so gentle and vivid. Ms. E |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Ms. E- Appreciate the love, happy you enjoyed. Cheers |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
James, Thanks, man. Hope you're doing well. Cheers |
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