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Fighting it Together
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Fighting it Together |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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 Uploaded with ImageShack.us killing time in my cocoon killing time wanting you saturated with your pain drenched in your dark past deeds of yesteryear delivered to you by extension to me a dangerous storm stinging a whirlpool effect swallows up chomping through our souls casting aside dreams made only yesterday you in your dark me in mine we'll stand strong to see the light ©January 5, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (01-07-2012 05:25 PM).] |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
May you both receive the strength, wisdom, and fortitude to "stand strong to see the light". Well done Jerry, enjoyed your poem, Ms. E |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
I see an outstretched hand in your poem; the eye of the storm, where there is peace. Very nice, Jerry |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
We are trying, Ms. E., and We will will see that light. Thank you very much for being here. <><> Nicole, you're right about that outstretched hand, my friend. Than you for noticing it. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Like a waterfall of emotions that keeps one in place with the longing to move towards the light, where one can open the eyes again and breathe hope and love. Beautifully rendered, dear Jerry! Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You wrote a loving poem within your comments, Margherita. Thank you. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
very strong & emotional piece Jerry - wonderful write! Love is the life of the soul... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Good day, tracie66, and thank you for such a lovely comment. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Being in a time capsule could be like this: a coal mine of old memories buried, echoing in the dark, waiting for a breath of fresh air to stir the tired captive, free soul to move in sunlight and warmth again, to traverse love without the winds of hurricane. We do learn to rise above the clouds...yes? And the thing about coal is that it evolves gemstones...diamonds. A thought provoking write, Jerry. Let there be light! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes indeed, Klassy Lassy, let there be light. Let there be diamonds. Let there be love. Thank you for your rousing comments. Lovely . . . ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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Word Weaver Member
since 2011-03-06
Posts 437California, USA |
"you in your dark me in mine will stand strong to see the light" A masterful write Jerry. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks, Marcia, I appreciate your kind words. ~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~ |
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