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shirtless
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since 2006-04-29
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0 posted 2012-01-05 09:51 PM



the train
to hell
passes
through a place
where the temperature
is perfect,
but it doesn't stop.
I know
that place -
it's miles
behind me now.

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2012-01-05 09:56 PM


Save me a seat, I'm right behind you.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

ice
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since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2012-01-06 06:53 AM


This looks like shirtless (Tattoo) right?
Looks like the kind of fine work , I think we once shared in a chat room?

If so, it's good to see you.

If not, this is a good read anyway.


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 2012-01-06 02:11 PM


I'm afraid that train to hell might be quite crowded...trouble is, some of us have paid more dearly for our ticket than others. Nice read!

I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S

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since 2008-01-27
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4 posted 2012-01-07 01:22 AM


It's always easier to jump on than off.  

A

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
5 posted 2012-01-08 05:54 AM


Glad to see you back, Anthony. Love your writing. To hear a train in the distance can be rather pleasant.
                            Ida

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