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Open Poetry #47

Her Scent

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2012-01-05 07:39 AM

her scent, like fresh snow
falling just outside your window
on this dark, Poeish night
has the sensory effect
of an hypnotic trance to me
the earthen, pleasing fragrance
an aphrodisiac
much like the snow dreamily falling
making history of the night

©December 28, 2011 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

1 posted 2012-01-05 07:55 AM

oooou~~but that's lovely~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2012-01-05 08:17 AM

Thank you, bel1e, your comments are appreciated.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

3 posted 2012-01-05 08:17 AM

You do have a dreamy way with words my friend, this is beautiful.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2012-01-05 09:14 AM

Thanks, Lori, just saying what's obvious about the scent.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2012-01-06 08:22 AM

Jerry this is simply beautiful

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2012-01-06 08:40 AM

Good morning, tracie66, and thank you so much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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