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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-01-04 08:19 PM


Something a little different . . .


Big rig driver made a stop that cold night,
To top off with diesel and eat a bite,
Headed to El Paso with a full load,
On a south Texas dreary mountain road.

She stood to the side of the cafe's door,
He averted his eyes, thought her a (b)ore.
After his meal, he drank a cup of joe,
He drank the coffee and paid what he owed.

She was still there, bent against the cold wind,
"Please, Mister," she said, "I just need a friend."
He did a double take; she was with child,
A desperate soul as she tried to smile.

He loaded her up inside his warm cab,
She said, "Thank you," and her stomach she grabbed.
He went back inside for something to eat,
She gobbled it up and said aren't you sweet.

Now that she was there, what was he to do?
He timidly asked her when are you due?
She said there was no family or friends,
No one in the world for her to depend.

In the mountain range of Guadalupe,
Her labor began, she asked him to pray.
He pulled off the road and shut the rig down,
It was much too far to get to a town.

The baby was coming, it would not wait,
Into the sleeper awaiting her fate,
He tried to help, but it was just his luck,
They were both stuck out there in his old truck.

The blood soaked everything, even her screams,
There was no water, not even a stream.
The baby came and mother died on cue,
How he got through it all he never knew.

He held the squealing, bloody baby girl,
And something inside him started to swirl.
The babe had begun, the odds against her,
The blood-spattered child was only a cur.

In El Paso he made all the right stops,
Hospital for child, and they called the cops.
Mother buried in potter's field so sad,
He claimed the child, saying he was her dad.



~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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1 posted 2012-01-04 09:23 PM


OMG! the emotion in this is deeply felt, you took me on that journey Jimmy, I was right there beside them - a fantastic write!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing



JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-04 09:40 PM


Haha! Thank you much and I'll tell Jimmie you spoke well of him too. Just kidding, tracie66, I make those kind of mistakes every so often.

As for the poem, many thanks for you kind words. I tried to put together a novel about a teenager girl and the truck driver, but it hasn't worked out. Maybe I'll pick it back up and try it again.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 2012-01-04 09:44 PM


Tugginging at the heartstrings not a dry eye in the house Jerry.  

Lori

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2012-01-04 09:46 PM


Hi Lori, thanks for your kind words. You're up late, not used to seeing you on PiP this late. Thanks again.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JL
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5 posted 2012-01-04 10:16 PM


Well, there you go again...
Another great story, very captivating.
Maybe you should try short stories.
This is really a good read.
Enjoyed, Jerry.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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6 posted 2012-01-04 10:19 PM


Appreciate it, JL. I have a few short stories, but wanted to turn this idea into a novel like I told tracie66, but it hasn't happened yet.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

latearrival
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7 posted 2012-01-05 01:40 AM


Well written.As I said once to you.I do read,just do not post much. As you can see l often pull an all nighter even thought I finally  quit working.jo
bel1e
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8 posted 2012-01-05 05:36 AM


wow ~~~ I could never tell a story and make it rhyme!  Great work, Mr. Pat!

             

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2012-01-05 06:03 AM


Glad you stopped by, latearrival and read and commented, it makes my day,

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Many thanks, bel1e, I appreciate your kind words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Nicole
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10 posted 2012-01-05 06:17 AM


Oh I do hope you turn it into a novel like you mentioned.  It would be on my bestseller list.  
JerryPat2
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11 posted 2012-01-05 06:19 AM


Thanks, Nicole. I have a few chapters on it already. I have tentatively named it "Adam and Eve,"

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2012-01-05 06:46 PM


Fine writing...James
JerryPat2
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13 posted 2012-01-05 07:16 PM


Thanks,James.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

suthern
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14 posted 2012-01-16 12:17 PM


What a gripping story! I enjoyed it immensely!

JerryPat2
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15 posted 2012-01-16 07:48 AM


Many thank, suthern, I appreciate the support.

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